Zornhau ([info]zornhau) wrote,

The miraculous power of Merlin's Snake Oil

Merlin's Snake Oil, that is the magical or SF'nal elements, is the not-so secret fuel of SF&F literature.

On the one hand, we, the readers, love wallowing in the stuff. We get all the more greased up with sensawonda if the oil is liberally applied to the plot itself – the mages and space rockets seem all the more real and vivid if the characters fight the one and ride the other. (Or vice versa.)

This is the trick behind good milieu novels like Lord of the Rings, and Jack McDevit's far future thrillers and mysteries. It's what makes Edgar Rice Burroughs' otherwise dated Mars and Venus series compelling – we experience the Other because the hero spends each novel fighting or making love to it.

On the other hand, Merlin's Snake Oil keeps interesting stories afloat. George RR Martin's and Guy Gavriel Kay tales of mighty princes would break a historical setting, but flourish like algae on a pool of the sorcerer's gloop. Mary Sue does the Cathar Chateau de Roissy needed a quasi medieval world with a kink. And Weber's modern people like us refight the Napoleonic Wars could only work in space.

These work best when the oil is not so much a plot device, as a plot steroid. War of any kind is lethal enough, but in Weber's Honorverse, bomb pumped nuclear lasers can wipe out a thousand ship's crew in just a handful of words. George RR Martin's sinister cloud on the horizon is so much more sinister for being magical.

So, no matter why the author introduces Merlin's Snake Oil, it's most effective if allowed to flow through the entire story, wowing the readers whenever they turn the corner, and pumping up the plot to so that the themes sing like a greatsword when it sweeps aside another blade.

All this suggests to me that you can work backwards from central myth –the level of "Boy finds girl, boy loses girl..." – to a good SF&F story by using the fantastic fluid to turn the mundane into the archetypal.

Take, just for example, an entirely hypothetical multi-threaded noir spy novel set in a far future of space stations and rocket ships.

When I think about classic – mundane - espionage tales, I think of high stakes and horrible personal peril. So, my instinct would be to blow up a planet, and make a likable character suffer an ingenious but toe curling violation - stakes and peril that only SF can serve up. And I'd have those possibilities driving at least some of the plot.

There's also the spy's loss of identity – didn't William Gibson had a spy discover she was a policewoman with a personality overlay, only the overlay liked the status quo?

What else? Spy writers love cosmopolitan cities like Istanbul. How about the ultimate cosmopolitan city – perhaps a space station of a thousand cultures, and as many languages and currencies?

And while we're on culture, why not use Merlin's Snake Oil to float some humans so far from the norm as to be almost literal aliens?

None of this would require extrapolative SF. The technobabble is still technobabble, even if it's extrapolated by Nobel Lauriates*. The reader's thrill would be in getting drunk on Merlin's Snake Oil and riding the hero's shoulder as he battles a cyborg on the decks of a burning spaceship as it spirals through the atmosphere of an overpopulated world, its hold promising nano-wibble-death to the inhabitants.

Just saying...

AFTERTHOUGHTS
*Though of course, fictional  technologies still have to operate with internal consistency, and be exploited authentically.

 
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[info]gominokouhai

September 3 2008, 20:30:11 UTC 3 years ago

> you can work backwards from central myth –the level of "Boy finds girl, boy loses girl..." – to a good SF&F story by using the fantastic fluid to turn the mundane into the archetypal.

I forget where I read this, but one of the best sentences in science fiction is (apparently) The door dilated. It adds colour and context, and reminds you that you're in a fantastical strange new world without being expository or pretentious.

[info]zornhau

September 3 2008, 21:06:58 UTC 3 years ago

Yes, that's a kind of background radiation emited by the oil. I think it serves a structural purpose to remind us constantly of the oil, but in a low-key way.

[info]jordan179

September 5 2008, 06:43:26 UTC 3 years ago

But to work well it has to be well-thought-out. Not necessarily accurate, but internally-consistent enough that the reader isn't forcibly struck by an obvious flaw in the setting that the hero or villain should be able to exploit to win. And this doesn't mean that the technologically or magic must always be logically used -- look at our own underexploitation of nuclear energy today, or of the steam engine and the semi-automatic crossbow in Antiquity -- simply that there must be some reason why the quick fix is unavailable.

Edgar Rice Burroughs' Barsoom skirts this rather delicately with the intricate Barsoomian code of honor, which allows for atomic bomb firing aerial battleships co-existing with decisive swordfights, because the Barsoomians are close to crazy about duelling. It works in the story, because we are aware of real-world cultures on Earth which have done that sort of thing in pursuit of a code of honor -- not to the extent of Barsoom, of course, but then the Barsoomians are aliens ...

... a less skillful writer than Burroughs couldn't have carried it off, IMO.

[info]zornhau

September 5 2008, 09:32:57 UTC 3 years ago

"But to work well it has to be well-thought-out. Not necessarily accurate, but internally-consistent enough that the reader isn't forcibly struck by an obvious flaw in the setting that the hero or villain should be able to exploit to win. "

Absolutely. And well said.

The babble is still babble - but the operation and usage must be authentic. However, that requires a whol different essay.... BZING! By the power of transtemporal magic, it is already writ:
http://zornhau.livejournal.com/123520.html#cutid1
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